HW : many or much / Diary : How to manage stress at work?

2013-03-05 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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HW:many CDs,much music,many cups,much juice,much time,many pencils,much cheese,many cornflakes,many pizzas,much lemonade/Diary:A strange guy!I work with a person who is a lawyer,and a team leader in the investment mangement department.In my common sense,it does not make sense to give a phone call every time when he catch some questions in the work paper.I do believe most people read a whole paper first,collect questions as reading it,and ask those questions at a time.However,he nagged me as calling me every thirty minutes to raise questions whenever he didn't understand something on the paper.While receiving his phonecall,I felt to get stressed a little bit as hearing phone ringing,seeing his phone number displayed on my phone,and talking to him.At that time,I came to think how to manage stress at work.When I have time, I go out and take some air as having deep respiration.In my office,I like to read a bible.It makes me more relaxed.Unfortunately,I couldn't do any those kind of things.

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for sharing this with me. It\'s good to know that you have your own ways of managing a stressful work life. This is very crucial especially if you have a lot of things to do. Anyway, just continue being positive, it\'ll boost your confidence more. See you tomorrow! Cheerios! Teacher GRACE W:many CDs, >> Correct much music, >> Correct many cups, >> Correct much juice, >> Correct much time, >> Correct many pencils, >> Correct much cheese, >> Correct many cornflakes,>> Correct many pizzas, >> Correct much lemonade >> Correct /Diary:A strange guy!I work with a person who is a lawyer,and a team leader in the investment mangement department. >> There\'s a strange guy working with a lawyer and a team leader in an investment management department. In my common sense,it does not make sense to give a phone call every time when he catch some questions in the work paper. >> Based on common sense, it doesn\'t make sense that he gives a phone call to someone every time he gets questions from the work paper. I do believe most people read a whole paper first,collect questions as reading it,and ask those questions at a time. >> I do believe that most people must read the paper first, take note of some questions and then ask those at a proper time. However,he nagged me as calling me every thirty minutes to raise questions whenever he didn\'t understand something on the paper. >> However, he nagged me and called me every thirty minutes to ask questions whenever he doesn\'t understand something. While receiving his phonecall,I felt to get stressed a little bit as hearing phone ringing,seeing his phone number displayed on my phone,and talking to him. >> While I was receiving phone calls, I felt so stressed seeing his number on the phone\'s screen knowing that he\'s going to ask questions again. Athat time,I came to think how to manage stress at work. >> At that time, I came to think of how to manage stress while at work. When I have time, I go out and take some air as having deep respiration. >> When I have time, I go out and take a deep breath. In my office,I like to read a bible.It makes me more relaxed.Unfortunately,I couldn\'t do any those kind of things. >> In the office, I like reading teh bible because it relaxes me. Unfortunately, I cannot do those things anymore.

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