HW: Once you graduate from a university should you stop learning?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I get a job after graduating from college, I think I will stop studying at the university. However, I think continuous learning is necessary when it comes to professional terms or work that I have to learn while working at a company. And it is also important to keep reading a book. Because When you reading a book, You can acquire various information.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday, Hazel! :)
Great ideas. I definitely agree with your opinion. ^^
- T. Rina ^^
1. If I get a job after graduating from college, I think I will stop studying at the university.
>> CORRECT!
2. However, I think continuous learning is necessary when it comes to professional terms or work that I have to learn while working at a company.
>> CORRECT!
3. And it is also important to keep reading a book.
>> CORRECT!
4. Because When you reading a book, You can acquire various information.
>> Because when you read a book, you can acquire various information.
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