HW: Please answer and explain: The benefits of having friends.
학생이 쓴 원문
Human beings cannot live alone in life. Among many relationships, there are many factors that make friends closer than other relationships. If I have a friend, I can counsel my worries and make memories together. Friends depend on each other and give advice. Sometimes there are conflicts with friends, but after solving them, we can understand each other more and get closer. So even if you don\'t have many friends, I think at least one or two people need them.
(A few days ago, I submitted an assignment on the subject of \"personal relationships,\" so I wrote it down a little longer this time.) ;)
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Hazel. ^^
I am so glad your homework is a little bit longer than usual.
I am so glad your homework is a little bit longer than usual.
I enjoy reading your sentences a lot. :)
I agree with you, no man is an island, right? :)
Thank you so much for this!
See you on Wednesday!
- T. Rina ^^
1. Human beings cannot live alone in life.
>> CORRECT!
2. Among many relationships, there are many factors that make friends closer than other relationships.
>> CORRECT!
3. If I have a friend, I can counsel my worries and make memories together.
>> CORRECT!
4. Friends depend on each other and give advice.
>> CORRECT!
5. Sometimes there are conflicts with friends, but after solving them, we can understand each other more and get closer.
>> CORRECT!
6. So even if you don\'t have many friends, I think at least one or two people need them.
>> CORRECT!
7. A few days ago, I submitted an assignment on the subject of \"personal relationships,\" so I wrote it down a little longer this time.
>> CORRECT!
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