HW&Request for checking out
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Hi there! It\'s the day after Christmas and I hope you had a great time celebrating it. Anyway, thank you so much for sending in your homework.
I really appreciate it. See you later.^^
~T. Camille^^
*pls check this for me.
>>*please check this for me.
Dear. all,
>>Dear all,
I am pleased to inform that we can use the old address on VEET cream AWs next year even though we change the address of manufacturer on the product license.
>>I am pleased to inform you that we can use the old address on VEET cream AWS next year even though we changed the address of the manufacturer on the product license.
This is the unusal case but RA,KR persuaded MFDS.
>>Correct [an unusual]
Dear. Eunjee,
>>Dear [Name],
But this is a kind of gaining time.
>>Correct
Pls schedule the revision VEET AWs and after 2015, we have to sell VEET products which have new AWs.(New address)
>>Please schedule the revision of VEET AWS and after 2015, we can sell VEET products with the new AWS.
HOMEWORK FOR TODAY:
Example: Your school needs new computers.
Answer: Does your school need new computers?
1. Your siblings get along with each other.
Do your siblings get along with each other?
>>Correct
2. You feel like getting something to eat.
Do you feel like getting something to eat?
>>Correct
3. Your lunch makes your mouth water.
Does your lunch make your mouth water?
>>Correct
4. Your homework takes a long time to do.
Does your homework take a long time to do?
>>Correct
5. Your best friend accepts you no matter what.
>> Please answer this question, too.^^
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