HW : Tell me something about your strangest dream.

2013-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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My strangest dream was for me to fight with villans as a superheroine.I like action movies,especially superhero movie.I feel attractive to tough ladies who start talk first with any people,help people with her various abilities,and act fastly without hesitation.It probably made me to live as a superheroine in my dream.It was fun! I was a very gorgeous lady.I helped people who need help.I could take them to their destination in a second,punished thieives in a bank,and soothe children when they lost something.How proud I was in my dream with omnipotent power!Wisdom is also crucial superheroes.They should think correctly,and differentiate good and evil,truth and false through their wisdom.After that,they can use their power for a right purpose.As a superheroine,I did my best to listen to people,and made a decision what should I do,and how I react in several situations.Unfortunately,I didn't have any chance to make superhero friends in my dream.Next time,I wish to make a strong boyfriend^^

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! Thank you so much for making this composition. I admire people who are like superheroes, people who help others without asking for any return. It\'s good that you have these dreams. Perhaps you really want to become the hero of the world. ^^ See you tomorrow! Cheerios! Teacher GRACE My strangest dream was for me to fight with villans as a superheroine. >> My strangest dream was when I was flying with villains as a superhero. I like action movies,especially superhero movie. >>  Correct I feel attractive to tough ladies who start talk first with any people,help people with her various abilities,and act fastly without hesitation. >> I become attracted to women who talk first with random people, help them with her different abilities and act instantly without any hesitation. It probably made me to live as a superheroine in my dream. >> It probably gave me the dream of living a hero\'s life. It was fun! >> Correct  I was a very gorgeous lady. >> I was with a gorgeous lady. I helped people who need help. >> Correct I could take them to their destination in a second,punished thieives in a bank,and soothe children when they lost something. >> I could take people from one place to another, push bank robbers and comfort children who have losing something. How proud I was in my dream with omnipotent power! >> I was so proud because I had an omnipotent power in my dream. Wisdom is also crucial superheroes. >>  Wisdom is also a crucial thing for superheroes. They should think correctly,and differentiate good and evil,truth and false through their wisdom. >> They should think rightfully and differentiate good from evil, know false things through their wisdom. After that,they can use their power for a right purpose. >> Correct As a superheroine,I did my best to listen to people,and made a decision what should I do,and how I react in several situations. >> As a superhero, I have to do my best to listen to people and make decisions on what I should do, that is how to react in several situations. Unfortunately,I didn\'t have any chance to make superhero friends in my dream.Next time,I wish to make a strong boyfriend^^ >> Unfortunately I didn\'t have any chance to make friends with superheroes in my dream. Next time, I want to have a stronger male friend.

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