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Q : Weekends are for relaxation and family time. For some people, they work continuously for 7 days in a week. What do you think it would be like without weekends?
A : I value weekends so much that I agree a four-day week, but I think working for 7 days in a week has benefits. First of all, when we work continuously everyday without weekends, there can be \'a life with dinner\', which means we can have dinner with our family and have some time for ourselves in the afternoon. So, if we work everyday, we don\'t have to work night overtime and have some time to relax everyday. Second, living without weekends can help us to live a regular life. I think the routine makes people more free because they don\'t have to plan everything, which makes them comfortable and free. Therefore, there is no distinction between weekdays and weekends, and that makes people to have own routine more easily.
강사 첨삭
Hello Ella. Thank you for this. Come to think of it, you do have a point. Although, working 7 days a week could also mean no going on trips or traveling with friends and family on the weekends.
- T. Beth
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I value weekends so much that I agree a four-day week, but I think working for 7 days in a week has benefits.
>>> I value weekends so much that I agree to a four-day week, but I think working for 7 days in a week has benefits.
First of all, when we work continuously everyday without weekends, there can be \'a life with dinner\', which means we can have dinner with our family and have some time for ourselves in the afternoon.
>>> correct
So, if we work everyday, we don\'t have to work night overtime and have some time to relax everyday.
>>> So, if we work everyday, we don\'t have to work overtime at night and have some time to relax everyday.
Second, living without weekends can help us to live a regular life.
>>> correct
I think the routine makes people more free because they don\'t have to plan everything, which makes them comfortable and free.
>>> correct
Therefore, there is no distinction between weekdays and weekends, and that makes people to have own routine more easily.
>>> Therefore, there is no distinction between weekdays and weekends, and that makes people to have their own routine more easily.
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