(HW) What do you especially remember about your elementary school teachers?
학생이 쓴 원문
My 2nd grade homeroom teacher was active and funny. She sometimes treat us strictly but when we played, she was our best friend. She liked to play with us and wanted to get time with us. So she tried to make time to play in various ways. We made cookie house, played water gun game and did fairy tale plays and shadow play. Now that I think about that time, it was not easy to play like this. Because teacher should prepare a lot before playing, pay attention to students for safety, clean up after playing. I\'m sure that her dedication and willingness to make a great class gave us special memories.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Wow, this is a wonderful essay. It makes me think of my own elementary school teachers as well. Thanks for sharing. ^ ^
-Rachel
My 2nd grade homeroom teacher was active and funny.
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>> OR: My 2nd grade homeroom teacher was enthusiastic and humorous.
She sometimes treat us strictly but when we played, she was our best friend.
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>>OR: She would be strict with us sometimes, but when we played, she was like one of us.
She liked to play with us and wanted to get time with us.
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>> OR: She invested time on us by playing and being with us.
So she tried to make time to play in various ways.
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>> OR: So she created various playtime and different games for us.
We made cookie house, played water gun game and did fairy tale plays and shadow play.
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>>OR: We made cookie houses, played games with water guns, did fairy tale and shadow plays.
Now that I think about that time, it was not easy to play like this.
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>> OR: When I reflect on that time, it was not easy to play such as we did.
Because teacher should prepare a lot before playing, pay attention to students for safety, clean up after playing.
>> Because the teacher should prepare a lot before playing, pay attention to students safety, and clean up after playing.
I\'m sure that her dedication and willingness to make a great class gave us special memories.
>> correct
>> OR: I am certain that her dedication and determination to give us great classes created special memories for us.
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