HW: What do you think is interesting about your culture?
학생이 쓴 원문
I think the delivery culture of Korea is the most unique. It can be delivered anywhere in Korea. You can also enjoy a picnic by delivering the food you want at the Han River. And there are many kinds of delivery food. In Korea, if you buy food like a supermarket in an online mall, there is a delivery system that arrives at 6 a.m. the next day. Thanks to this fast delivery system, Korea does not seem to be out of stock even if the COVID 19 incident occurs.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hazel! :)
I agree, the delivery system in Korea is outstanding. I wish we also have that kind of culture. :)
Thank you for sharing this.
- T. Rina ^^
1. I think the delivery culture of Korea is the most unique.
>> CORRECT!
2. It can be delivered anywhere in Korea.
>> CORRECT!
3. You can also enjoy a picnic by delivering the food you want at the Han River.
>> You can also enjoy a picnic by letting restaurants deliver the food that you want at the Han River.
4. And there are many kinds of delivery food.
>> CORRECT!
5. In Korea, if you buy food like a supermarket in an online mall, there is a delivery system that arrives at 6 a.m. the next day.
>> CORRECT!
6. Thanks to this fast delivery system, Korea does not seem to be out of stock even if the COVID 19 incident occurs.
>> CORRECT!
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