HW: What do you think the most common crime in your country is?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most common crime in our country is drunk driving. The reason is that most people take this crime lightly and drive and accidents happen. In Korea, there are many cases in which a person died from a car accident caused by drunk driving. Therefore, if you drink alcohol without taking this issue lightly, you should drive by proxy.
강사 첨삭
Thank you again for this, Hazel. :)
Many people do this and it is really sad. An innocent pedestrian can get killed because of drunk driving.
I hope our government will be more strict on this issue.
Good night, dear. ^^
- T. Rina
1. The most common crime in our country is drunk driving.
>> CORRECT!
2. The reason is that most people take this crime lightly and drive and accidents happen.
>> CORRECT!
3. In Korea, there are many cases in which a person died from a car accident caused by drunk driving.
>> CORRECT!
4. Therefore, if you drink alcohol without taking this issue lightly, you should drive by proxy.
>> Therefore, if you drink alcohol without taking this issue lightly, you should have a proxy driver.
OR: Therefore, if you drink alcohol without taking this issue lightly, you should have a substitute driver.
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