HW: What is culture shock and can you give an example?

2020-07-22 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t think there was much culture shock. One thing comes to mind when I traveled Europe when I was 16. It was when my aunt, uncle, younger brother and I went on a trip to Europe together. My aunt and uncle went to the lobby to check in at the hotel, and I and my brothers stayed in the car. But it was a hot summer, so my uncle left the car engine on. Suddenly a woman came in and looked at us, and shouted the children, \"Oh, my! The children are in the car!\" Perhaps she was a hotel employee who was surprised to find us when she came to turn off the car because the power was on. Switzerland is said to be fined for leaving children in their cars. So she seems to be greatly surprised to see us. So I felt cultural differences through this situation.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Hazel! ^^
Wow, it was really shocking. 
The woman must be really concerned, right?
Thank you for sharing this with me. I\'ll make sure not to leave any child in the car when I travel to Europe in the future. 

- T. Rina


1. I don\'t think there was much culture shock. 
>> CORRECT!

2. One thing comes to mind when I traveled Europe when I was 16. 
>> One thing comes to mind when I traveled to Europe when I was 16.

3. It was when my aunt, uncle, younger brother and I went on a trip to Europe together. 
>> CORRECT!

4. My aunt and uncle went to the lobby to check in at the hotel, and I and my brothers stayed in the car.
>> CORRECT!

5. But it was a hot summer, so my uncle left the car engine on. 
>> CORRECT!

6. Suddenly a woman came in and looked at us, and shouted the children, 
>> CORRECT!

7. \"Oh, my! The children are in the car!\" 
>> CORRECT!

8. Perhaps she was a hotel employee who was surprised to find us when she came to turn off the car because the power was on. 
>> CORRECT!

9. Switzerland is said to be fined for leaving children in their cars. 
>> CORRECT!

10. So she seems to be greatly surprised to see us. 
>> CORRECT!

11. So I felt cultural differences through this situation.
>> CORRECT!

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