HW: What is your lifetime dream?

2020-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Rina

학생이 쓴 원문

First, I think happiness is the most important thing. I want to live my life traveling around the world on the premise that my life is happy. If I have a chance, I would like to live not only in Korea but also abroad for a certain period of time and experience different cultures of the country.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Hazel! ^^

I agree. Having true happiness is my goal as well.

I hope we will be truly happy in the future! ^^

- T. Rina

1. First, I think happiness is the most important thing.
>> CORRECT!

2. I want to live my life traveling around the world on the premise that my life is happy.
>> I want to live my life traveling around the world on the premise that I am living a happy life.

3. If I have a chance, I would like to live not only in Korea but also abroad for a certain period of time and experience different cultures of the country.

>> CORRECT!

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