HW: What is your opinion on climate change?
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was young, I used to be an \'ECO leader\' in the Ministry of Environment. As I was active, I felt how dangerous the Earth was. As it was environmental day not long ago, we are currently using a lot of disposable products due to COVID-19. Under these circumstances, you cannot help but use a mask, but you should try to prevent disposable products from coming out of your daily life.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hazel!~ ^^
Wow, I didn\'t know you were an Eco-leader. That\'s good to hear. You definitely cared about the environment.
Wow, I didn\'t know you were an Eco-leader. That\'s good to hear. You definitely cared about the environment.
I hope we can prevent the use of disposable products.
Thank you for this.
See you tomorrow!
- T. Rina ^^
1. When I was young, I used to be an \'ECO leader\' in the Ministry of Environment.
>> CORRECT!
2. As I was active, I felt how dangerous the Earth was.
>> CORRECT!
3. As it was environmental day not long ago, we are currently using a lot of disposable products due to COVID-19.
>> CORRECT!
4. Under these circumstances, you cannot help but use a mask, but you should try to prevent disposable products from coming out of your daily life.
>> CORRECT!
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