HW: What responsibilities do university students have? How about children or adults?
학생이 쓴 원문
College students are both students and adults. Therefore, unlike in high school, my homeroom teacher does not exist and no one gets angry at me just because I am absent or left early. The difference seems to be that professors are no longer involved in the fact that even the same student has become an \"adult.\" The role that should be played as a college student should try to achieve excellent grades by faithfully studying the tasks they are assigned to. The role of students is to study, not to play, so we should concentrate on our studies. Also, I think it is necessary to plan the future of how I will live alone in the future by getting out of my parents\' fence. I think I should pay attention to politics, economy, and society because my parents can\'t live with me forever and I have to be completely independent after graduating from college.
강사 첨삭
Wonderful Wednesday, Hazel! :)
You are a very mature person and I think this will be a good advantage for you when you try to live alone. :)
- T. Rina
1. College students are both students and adults.
>> CORRECT!
2. Therefore, unlike in high school, my homeroom teacher does not exist and no one gets angry at me just because I am absent or left early.
>> Therefore, unlike in high school, my homeroom teacher does not exist and no one gets angry at me just because I am absent or I left early.
3. The difference seems to be that professors are no longer involved in the fact that even the same student has become an \"adult.\"
>> CORRECT!
4. The role that should be played as a college student should try to achieve excellent grades by faithfully studying the tasks they are assigned to.
>> CORRECT!
5. The role of students is to study, not to play, so we should concentrate on our studies.
>> CORRECT!
6. Also, I think it is necessary to plan the future of how I will live alone in the future by getting out of my parents\' fence.
>> Also, I think it is necessary to plan the future like how I will live alone by getting out of my parents\' fence.
7. I think I should pay attention to politics, economy, and society because my parents can\'t live with me forever and I have to be completely independent after graduating from college.
>> CORRECT!
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