HW : What was the best book you have ever read?
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My best book is the name of ‘8 words’. It’s an essay and I picked this book by chance(?) at the library. It guides you how to deal with our life. The most impressive thing in the book is that ‘We should(or have to ? Idk which one would be better.) be happy at this moment’. This means we have to concentrate now, not to worry about the future, not to care about the past. This happy moments come together and become our life. After reading this, I\'ve tried to enjoy the sunshine more, become more grateful for small things.
And plus, the writer recommend other books, so I could keep reading other books.
Fri Aug 26. The weather is getting cold. I guess fall is coming. The weather seem to change suddenly sometimes. Today, I felt good cuz I got my hair cut and studied hard too! I\'m proud of myself ㅋㅋㅋ!
Thanks Gina teacher! have a wonderful weekends :D
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Hi, Erin!
Thank you for sharing about your favorite book. I got curious about it so I tried searching and I only found a Korean version.
Anyway, I like what it said : \'We should be happy at this moment.\'
Thank you for sharing about your favorite book. I got curious about it so I tried searching and I only found a Korean version.
Anyway, I like what it said : \'We should be happy at this moment.\'
As I got older, it made me realize the value of enjoying the moment, moving on from the past and not worrying so much about the future.
I believe that the present or the \'now\' is the link between the past and the future.
Being happy and grateful of what we have at the moment makes us move on from the past and makes us feel more confident and less stressed about the future. ^^
I\'m glad that the weather is not hot anymore. I hope the weather will stay nice. And yes! That\'s the spirit! I like your haircut. It looks good on you and it\'s neat. You did well and worked hard today. You\'re doing great!
Stay awesome and have a wonderful weekend as well!
Let\'s be happy and enjoy the moment in our lives. Let\'s feel proud of our wins- whether small or big. They are all our achievements in life and need to be celebrated. ^^
I believe that the present or the \'now\' is the link between the past and the future.
Being happy and grateful of what we have at the moment makes us move on from the past and makes us feel more confident and less stressed about the future. ^^
I\'m glad that the weather is not hot anymore. I hope the weather will stay nice. And yes! That\'s the spirit! I like your haircut. It looks good on you and it\'s neat. You did well and worked hard today. You\'re doing great!
Stay awesome and have a wonderful weekend as well!
Let\'s be happy and enjoy the moment in our lives. Let\'s feel proud of our wins- whether small or big. They are all our achievements in life and need to be celebrated. ^^
~ Teacher Gina
My best book is the name of ‘8 words’. It’s an essay and I picked this book by chance(?) at the library. It guides you how to deal with our life. The most impressive thing in the book is that ‘We should(or have to ? Idk which one would be better.) be happy at this moment’. This means we have to concentrate now, not to worry about the future, not to care about the past. This happy moments come together and become our life. After reading this, I\'ve tried to enjoy the sunshine more, become more grateful for small things.
And plus, the writer recommend other books, so I could keep reading other books.Fri Aug 26. The weather is getting cold. I guess fall is coming. The weather seem to change suddenly sometimes. Today, I felt good cuz I got my hair cut and studied hard too! I\'m proud of myself ㅋㅋㅋ!
Thanks Gina teacher! have a wonderful weekends :D
>> The title of the best book for me is \'8 words\'. It\'s an essay, and I picked this book by chance at the library. It guides you on how to deal with your life. The most impressive thing in the book is that \'We should be happy at this moment. This means we have to concentrate now, not worry about the future, and not care about the past. These happy moments come together and become our life. After reading this, I\'ve tried to enjoy the sunshine more and become more grateful for small things.
Plus, the writer recommended other books, so I could keep reading other books.
Fri Aug 26. The weather is getting cold. I guess fall is coming. The weather seems to change suddenly sometimes. Today, I felt good cuz I got my hair cut and studied hard too! I\'m proud of myself ㅋㅋㅋ!
Thanks, Gina teacher! have a wonderful weekend :D
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