HW : What was the most recent book you've read? What was it about?
학생이 쓴 원문
I read the book one years ago, that was about self-improvement.
This book is written by Kim Nan Do, called 20's mento, who is a professor.
In 20's, it is very hard to everyone, because we can't see anything about our future life.
In that book, the statement which is touched me is 'If life is 24hours, I live at 7:45 am.
As many people start their life in the morning, this time, 20's, is very important to me and real life will begin from now on.
It is very hopeful to me and it encourages me to do my best to all things.
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름]!!
A pleasant Friday to you~~
Thank you very much for sending me this homework once again.
Certainly life is full of surprises and we\'ll never know what\'s stored for us until we get there.
Keep living your life to the fullest all the time! :)
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Have a blast on the weekend!
T.Kristel
I read the book one years ago, that was about self-improvement.
>> I read a book about self-improvement a year ago.This book is written by Kim Nan Do, called 20\'s mento, who is a professor.
>> The book was entitled, 20\'s mento which was written by a professor named Kim Nam Do.In 20\'s, it is very hard to everyone, because we can\'t see anything about our future life.
>> Things are very hard for everyone in their 20\'s because they still couldn\'t see anything about their future.In that book, the statement which is touched me is \'If life is 24hours, I live at 7:45 am.
>> In that book, the statement which touched me is \'If life is 24hours, I would live at 7:45 am. As many people start their life in the morning, this time, 20\'s, is very important to me and real life will begin from now on.
>> As many people start their lives in the morning, 20\'s is the stage that is very important to me because real life begins here.It is very hopeful to me and it encourages me to do my best to all things.
>> It gives me hope and encourages me to do my best in everything.
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