hw.What would you do differently if there were 30 hours in a day?
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If there were 30 hours in a day, I would try to schedule my plans more efficiently.
In order to stay awake at daytime, I would sleep for about 7 hours, because usually, I sleep for about 5 to 6 hours.
Having 6 more hours to use in a single day, I would take time to exercise and take care of my health.
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This is awesome!
If there were 30 hours in a day, I would try to schedule my plans more efficiently.
>> Correct.
In order to stay awake at daytime, I would sleep for about 7 hours, because usually, I sleep for about 5 to 6 hours.
>> Correct.
Having 6 more hours to use in a single day, I would take time to exercise and take care of my health.
>> Correct.
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