HW: When is the best time for a person to start looking for a job?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t think the time is important in finding one\'s job. It is important to find a job where you can be happy doing what you want to do. Lastly, I think the most important thing is to plan your life in advance and not waste time.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Hazel! ^^
Thank you so much for this.
You have made perfect sentences! ^^
You have made perfect sentences! ^^
- T. Rina ^^
1. I don\'t think the time is important in finding one\'s job.
>> CORRECT!
2. It is important to find a job where you can be happy doing what you want to do.
>> CORRECT!
3. Lastly, I think the most important thing is to plan your life in advance and not waste time.
>> CORRECT!
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