HW: Why do people say laughter is the best medicine?
학생이 쓴 원문
Laughing in a trivial situation helps you think positively. This evidence has been scientifically proven. I agree laughter is the best medicine because I felt better when I laughed when I was depressed.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Hazel! ^^
Great sentences. Keep it up! :)
Great sentences. Keep it up! :)
- T. Rina ^^
1. Laughing in a trivial situation helps you think positively.
>> CORRECT!
2. This evidence has been scientifically proven.
>> CORRECT!
3. I agree laughter is the best medicine because I felt better when I laughed when I was depressed.
>> CORRECT!
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