HW: Would you like to open your own business? Why or why not?
학생이 쓴 원문
I don\'t want to run my own business. This is because he is not used to managing many people, and even if he becomes a CEO, he is likely to suffer continuous stress due to lack of leadership.
I think it would be better to get a job at a famous company and do something that suits your personality.
But these days, I\'m worried that start-ups have become more popular.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Hazel!
It\'s nice reading your homework again. ^^
I liked the expression, \"run my own business\". Great job!
I agree, people think becoming a CEO is quite fun because he/she can earn a lot of money, little do they know that it is also very stressful.
Thank you for this! ^^
- T. Rina
1. I don\'t want to run my own business.
>> CORRECT!
2. This is because he is not used to managing many people, and even if he becomes a CEO, he is likely to suffer continuous stress due to lack of leadership.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
3. I think it would be better to get a job at a famous company and do something that suits your personality.
>> CORRECT!
>> CORRECT!
4. But these days, I\'m worried that start-ups have become more popular.
>> CORRECT!
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