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Hello Ariel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

I was injured when i was 21

>> I was injured when I was 21.
One day i was going down the stair for get some subway,

>> One day I was going down the stairs to get to the subway.
Then i was slip the stair so my ankle have some pain.

>> Then I slipped down the stairs and my ankle was in pain.
So for a long time i have a cast

>> So for a long time, I had a cast on it.