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2018-10-17 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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If i could go when I was younger and only what I can do is advice to me, I want to tell me that "play more!" Since elementary school, I have studied hard becuase I had appealed my talent more in study than anything. I didn't have exact purpose for study, but I liked being praised from parents so I always studied hard. But, now I know that I don't have much more talent than others, and I regret that I couldn't experience something or somewhere more. Thus, I want to tell me that you have to enjoy what you can do only in that time.

강사 첨삭

Hey Jay!(\",)

Well, you are still young so you can start doing the things you want to do and going to places you want to visit now. You can do it!(\",)

~T. Lynn   

If i could go when I was younger and only what I can do is advice to me, I want to tell me that \"play more!\"

>> If I could go back when I was younger and I can advice myself, I want to say to my younger self play more.

Since elementary school, I have studied hard becuase I had appealed my talent more in study than anything.

>> Since elementary school, I have studied hard because I have a talent/skill in studying.

OR>> Since I was an elementary student, I have been studying hard because that\'s what I do best.

I didn\'t have exact purpose for study, but I liked being praised from parents so I always studied hard.

>> I didn\'t have exact purpose for studying, but I liked being praised by my parents so I always studied hard.

But, now I know that I don\'t have much more talent than others, and I regret that I couldn\'t experience something or somewhere more.

>> But now, I realized that I\'m not more talented compared to my peers so I regret that I didn\'t experience other things and traveled somewhere else.

Thus, I want to tell me that you have to enjoy what you can do only in that time.

>> correct!

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