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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey Jay!(\",)
Well, said. As they say, humans are social animals. We need other people in order to exist. But not only that, like you said, we need to get someone\'s attention and recognition too. Good luck on your test on Sunday!(\",)
~T. Lynn
There is a fancy word like a man really die when people begin to forget him.
>> There\'s a famous saying/line which says a man really died when people have forgotten him.
This word shows well that human is being that live with others.
>> This goes to show that humans are beings that live with others.
Naturally, it is so frightening if I die but it is more scary if there are no one who know me in this world.
>> Naturally, it is so frightening if I die but it is more scary if there is no one who knows me in this world.
The great men who did tremendous works still have been memorized until now and we can learn their works in the history books.
>> The great men who did tremendous works are still remembered until now and we can learn about their lives and works in the history books.
Maybe it will be glory if I can be memorized to whomever.
>> Maybe it will be glorifying if I can be remembered by someone.
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