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2018-10-29 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I can't say that anorexia is not affected by fashion industry, because almost fashion indurstries are targetting to skinny people. But, I don't think that only fashion makes people get anorexia. Almost people who get anorexia might not have confidence in their appearance, and this is because of the current society. Actually, there are so many merits in this society for good appearance, and I don't say it is not good. However, the society in thesesdays can make many people lose confidence in their appearance, and also they can get mental diseases. Thus, I think having confidence is the most important thing and people related with patients must help them restore their confidence.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jay!(\",)

Well said! but people who doesn\'t care about fashion seemed pitiful or strange to most people. Still, as one of those who doesn\'t really care about fashion, I say who cares! I will still wear what is comfortable and not what most people see as fashionable. What about you, do you always follow the latest trend in the fashion world?(\",)

~T. Lynn

I can\'t say that anorexia is not affected by fashion industry, because almost fashion indurstries are targetting to skinny people.

>> I can\'t say that anorexia is not affected by the fashion industry, because most of the time the fashion industry is targeting skinny people.

But, I don\'t think that only fashion makes people get anorexia.

>> correct!

Almost people who get anorexia might not have confidence in their appearance, and this is because of the current society.

>> Almost all people who get anorexia might not have confidence in their appearance, and this is because of the current society.

Actually, there are so many merits in this society for good appearance, and I don\'t say it is not good.

>> correct!

However, the society in these days can make many people lose confidence in their appearance, and also they can get mental diseases.

>> However, the society these days can make many people lose confidence in their appearance, and also they can get mental diseases.

Thus, I think having confidence is the most important thing and people related with patients must help them restore their confidence.

>> Thus, I think having confidence is the most important thing and people related with the patients must help them restore their confidence. 

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