HW17

2018-10-30 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

학생이 쓴 원문

In the present, I'm in very usual lives and I always have desire for other lives. I'm so usual because almost peers in Korea are living like my lifestyles and also there are also different lifestyles in my ages like models. I think I have to satisfy something like height to be model. But I'm not tall enough to be model so I think this is a reason why I want to live as model. Even though I want to be live as other lifestyles like model, it is not true that I have dissatisfaction for my lifestyle. I'm so happy because I'm in SKKU college that I wanted to enter.

강사 첨삭

Hi Jay!(\",)

We can\'t all be models or celebrities so most of us are just ordinary mortals but it doesn\'t mean we couldn\'t be happy and satisfied with our ordinary lives. Sometimes being ordinary is for the best.

~T. Lynn

In the present, I\'m in very usual lives and I always have desire for other lives.

>> At present, I\'m living a very normal life so I always desire to live a different life.

I\'m so usual because almost peers in Korea are living like my lifestyles and also there are also different lifestyles in my ages like models.

>> I\'m so average because almost all my peers in Korea are living like my lifestyle but there are also different lifestyles for people my age like models.

I think I have to satisfy something like height to be model.

>> I think I have to be tall to become a model.

But I\'m not tall enough to be model so I think this is a reason why I want to live as model.

>> But I\'m not tall enough to be a model so I think this is the reason why I want to live as a model.

Even though I want to be live as other lifestyles like model, it is not true that I have dissatisfaction for my lifestyle. I\'m so happy because I\'m in SKKU college that I wanted to enter.

>> Even though I want to live like a model, I\'m not dissatisfied with my life. I\'m so happy because I\'m studying at SKKU that I wanted to enter.

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