HW18
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
I\'ll give you another saying, \"opportunity knocks only once.\" Do you believe that?
~T. Lynn
This quotation is saying that opportunity is more necessary than ability.
>> correct!
But this is not true because of several reasons.
>> correct!
I think abilities and preparations are more important than the opportunities.
>> correct!
I know another quotation \"The man who ready can take opportunity\".
>> I know another quotation that says, \" a man who is ready can take the opportunity\".
This says that the man who isn\'t ready couldn\'t take opportunity because the men won\'t know it is oppotunity if he isn\'t ready for something.
>> This simply mean that who isn\'t ready couldn\'t take the opportunity because a person won\'t know it is an opportunity if he isn\'t ready for something.
Like this statement, there are so many people who want opportunity without effort.
>> There are so many people who want to take the opportunity without any effort.
I think they won\'t take opportunity forever if they don\'t have thinking that they have to be ready for success.
>> I think they won\'t have any opportunity if they don\'t get ready for success,
Thus, I\'m struggling to be ready for everything as much as possible.
>> correct!
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