HW2

2020-01-17 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

almost i see their personality. I think most relationship need each others chemist. If me and my friend have opposite side of our personality, we would have fought every meeting.

강사 첨삭

Hello Ariel!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

almost i see their personality.

>> I see their personalities.
I think most relationship need each others chemist.

>> I think most relationships needs to have chemistry between two people.
If me and my friend have opposite side of our personality, we would have fought every meeting.

>> If me and my friend have opposite personalities, we would fight every time we meet.

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