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Hey Jay!(\",)

It took me a long time to finish your composition today because I can\'t fully understand what you mean. I had to read your sentences over and over again. Sorry...

~T. Lynn  

There are so many good quotatuons like this to say that it is important not to forgive.

>> There are so many good quotations like this saying how important it is to forgive.

This also says that rising in everytime we fall is the greatest glorious moment.

>> This also says that rising every time we fall is the greatest or glorious moment.

Normally, I think we have to learn like this mental but it is also important to know the time when we have to forgive.

>> I think we have to learn  this mentality but it is also important to know the time when we have to forgive.

After succeeding failure, it is difficult to forgive doing that because I invested so much time and cost for that already.

>> After succeeding despite a lot of failures, it is difficult to forget that because I invested so much time and money already. 

However, if I can\'t forgive that at that time, I will spend more cost and time.

>> However, If I can\'t forgive and forget, I will spend more money and time.

And also, there are many situations which is not problem only for me but also for the others.

>> And also, there are many situations wherein it\'s not only a problem for me but also for others.

Thus I have to consider the others whether preceed or stop it.

>> Thus I have to consider the others before I proceed or not.

 Balancing between stopping and going on is neccessary for my future

>> correct!

OR>> Knowing when to go on or when to stop is very important.