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Hi Jay!(\",)

I agree that the in the very near future, people will be dealing more in the virtual world but I still believe that face to face communication is important. Robots can never replace humans when it comes to dealing with human emotions. You are getting better in sharing your opinions. Keep it up!(\",)

~T. Lynn

Nowadays, people say that the fourth industrial revolution is coming through.

>> Nowadays, people say that the fourth industrial revolution is coming.

The fourth industrial revolution is about the network.

>> correct!

Before coming fourth revolution, people could use internet with their own computers at their home.

>> Before the coming  of the fourth revolution, people could use the internet with their own computers at their homes.

OR>> Before the fourth revolution came, people could only use the internet using their computers at home.

 However, people can use internet anywhere and anytime and it is neccessary in our lives.

>> However, people can now use the internet anywhere, anytime and it is now a necessity in our lives.

And then, people tend to be more comfortable in the internet than in the reality.

>> People now tend to be more comfortable using the internet rather than dealing with reality.

Some people criticize for acting like that the network world is the real world.

>> Some people criticize them for believing in the virtual world than the real world.

 For this thinking, I have opposite opinion.

>> correct!

Of course, the real world is more important than the virtual world, but I think the real communication will not be neccessary in the future.

>> correct!

Thus, the criticism for meeting in virtual world is useless already.

>> Thus, the criticism for meeting in the virtual world is useless already.

We have to arrange ourselves arround the flows of changing.

>> We have to adapt to change.