HW23
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hey Jay!(\",)
Unlike other young people that I know, you know the latest news about your country. This means you update yourself of what is happening around you. This is great because it means you care somewhat. Good job on today\'s homework, Keep it up!(\",)
~T. Lynn
For these two problems, unemployment and inflation, I think that the government already implement several schemes.
>> For these two problems, unemployment and inflation, I think that the government already implemented several schemes.
First, lawmakers made a rule that regulate the working time in 52 hours.
>> First, the lawmakers made a law that regulates the working time in 52 hours.
Even though the scheme has been implemented, the companies have same amount of works.
>> Even though the scheme has been implemented, the companies have same amount of work left.
So, they have to employ people more to deal with their works.
>> So they have to employ more people to deal with this.
Second, there is also another scheme to solve the inflation that is restriction of real estate.
>> correct!
I don\'t know this scheme in detail, but I have heard that the government are expecting it can solve the inflation.
>> correct!
Like these, there are already many policies to solve the problem in the society.
>> Like what I have stated/mentioned, there are already many policies to solve the problems in society.
What I can do for those problem is watiching how efficient it is.
>> What I can only do is to observe if these policies will be effective in solving the problems.
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