HW3/20, Diary : Children's day!

2013-03-22 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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[HW3/20]1)for2)for3)of4)like5)to6)for7)for8)with9)of10)of[Diary]My supervisor has been off for almost two weeks because of his business trip.How happy we are in this children's days!I know my team leader is a cool guy.He is as patient as he can understand my slow work style.He leads our team in positive ways,and tries to complement us even for small things.Although I like, somewhat respect him,I feel relaxed when he is off.Someone told me that most people may feel similar relaxing atmosphere because workers are normally linked with their supervisors through works and commands.So supervisors' absence means that workers are free in some ways,at least they don't need to receive spontaneous work orders from their employers.I know that a good worker keeps working with his normal face even though his/her supervisor don't touch him/her.What I'm trying to do is to keep common ground rules at work such as don't be late,make use of work time for our company,etc.What if my employee hate me as a s

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Hi [이름]! Thank you for making this composition for me. I\'m glad because you\'re still keeping track of your page regardless of your busy schedule. Just continue to have that determination. Soonest you\'ll reap your efforts. See you tomorrow! Cheerios! Teacher Grace [HW3/20] 1)for >> at 2)for>> about 3)of >> Correct 4)like>> Correct 5)to >> Correct 6)for >> of 7)for>> Correct 8)with >> Correct 9)of >> on 10)of >> Correct [Diary]My supervisor has been off for almost two weeks because of his business trip. >> Correct >> My supervisor has been off for two weeks now because of his business trip. How happy we are in this children\'s days! >> Correct I know my team leader is a cool guy. >> Correct He is as patient as he can understand my slow work style. >> He is patient since he understands my slow work style. He leads our team in positive ways,and tries to complement us even for small things. >> He leads our team positively and tries to give us compliments even for small things. Although I like, somewhat respect him,I feel relaxed when he is off. >> Although I like and respect him, I feel more relaxed now that he\'s off. Someone told me that most people may feel similar relaxing atmosphere because workers are normally linked with their supervisors through works and commands. >> Someone told me that most people feel the same atmosphere because workers or employees are normally linked to their supervisors through their work and command. So supervisors\' absence means that workers are free in some ways,at least they don\'t need to receive spontaneous work orders from their employers. >> So the absence of their supervisors means that employees are free in some ways, at least they don\'t have to receive or accept workload from their superiors. I know that a good worker keeps working with his normal face even though his/her supervisor don\'t touch him/her. >>Correct What I\'m trying to do is to keep common ground rules at work such as don\'t be late,make use of work time for our company,etc.What if my employee hate me as a s >> What I try to do is follow basic company policies such as not being tardy, make use of the work time etc. What if my employer will hate me for not doing those.

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