HW30
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강사 첨삭
Hey Jay,
I agree with you but if everyone keeps telling you that you are fat or ugly, it can really hurt you emotionally which can lead to low self-esteem and self confidence. Because you think better than other people, you should always think and say to any woman that you meet that they are beautiful in their own way. Be a gentleman in the truest sense of the word.(\",)
The standard of beauty has been changed over years.
>> The standard of beauty has changed over the years.
In the past, women who are plump and have typical oriental face were thought as beautiful women.
>> correct!
There were so many poor so, plumpness could be thought as symbol of wealth.
>> There were so many poor people at that time so plumpness could be taken as a symbol of wealth.
In this instance, I can know that beaty can be defined by environment of that era.
>> In this instance, I know that beaty can be defined by the environment of that era.
These days, women who are slim and have good features are tought as the standard of beauty.
>> These days, women who are slim and have good features are thought as the standard of beauty.
Also, I have an opinion that the standard of beauty is different with countries.
>> Also, in my opinion, the standard of beauty is different in each country.
For example, people think a slim woman who has fair skin is beautiful in Korea, but in West, people think a woman who seems healthy is beautiful lady.
>> For example, people think a slim woman who has fair skin is beautiful in Korea, but in the West, people think a woman who seems healthy is a beautiful lady.
Thus, I think people who don\'t satisfied with their appearance don\'t need think like that because they can be classified as beautiful and handsome in other countries or era.
>> Thus, I think people who aren\'t satisfied with their appearance don\'t need to think like that because they can be classified as beautiful and handsome in other countries or era.
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