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Hey Jay,

Good or you! You are right! You are still very young. You just started with your road to \"life\". Enjoy it!(\",)

~Lynn   

Many industries have been developed over years, so our lives are convenient enough to go wherever I want to go.

>> Many industries have been developed over the years, so it is convenient to go wherever I want to go.

If I want to go somewhere now and I\'m afford to reserve a flight ticket, I can go there in 24 hours.

>> If I want to go somewhere now and I can afford to reserve a flight ticket, I can go there in 24 hours.

Also, I\'m young and healthy to do anything.

>> correct!

Thus, nowadays, I appreciate for living in this era.

>> Thus, I appreciate living in this era.

 I think the present is the most beautiful thing in my life.

>> correct!

 I can experience what I want.

>> correct!

From these experiences, I will be able to think of my life in the future and get a comfort.

>> From these experiences, I will be able to think of my comfortable life in the future.

During my military obligation, I had many times for thinking of my life and I decided to try everything.

>> During my military obligation, I had plenty of time to think of my life and I have decided to try everything.

I decided to go Australia because of this mind and I want to get many good things from Work&Holiday.

>> I have decided to go to Australia because of this mindset and I want to get many good things from working while on a holiday.