HW32
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
I believe that beauty is in the eye of the beholder because what is beautiful to you might not be beautiful to me. That simple.(\",)
~T. Lynn
There are so many standard of beauty because different people have different viewpoints for something.
>> There are so many standards of beauty because different people have different viewpoints on something.
But, like previous composition I wrote, there must be universal standard of beauty in particular era.
>> But like what I said on the previous composition I wrote, there must be a standard of beauty in particular era.
I think that although beautiful things could be different in small concept because of different viewpoints, there must be big flow for notion of beauty .
>> I think that although beautiful things could be different because of different viewpoints, there must be big flaw for the notion of beauty .
Of course, there are few people who have opposite opinions against the universal standard and insist it isn\'t beautiful.
>> Of course, there are few people who have opposite opinions against the universal standard and they insist it isn\'t beautiful.
In my opinion, the beauty is a ambiguous notion. Thus, it is important to believe what I think
>> In my opinion, beauty is an ambiguous notion. Thus, it is important to believe what I think.
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