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2018-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I have experienced the acupuncture several times becuase of my ankle and waist. As I like playing soccer game and working out at the gym, so there have been many injuries. Now, I will talk about faith healer and with doctor. I can classify these as superstition. Do you know \"placebo effect\"? I think if there are people who get better after being treated by these, it may be because of placebo effect. I can\'t say that they are good methods to treat diseases, but it doesn\'t matter if patients become better status. However, people who abuse their unrgent mind to get some money have to be criticized.

강사 첨삭

Jay,

I believe in faith healing to some extent but no matter how strong your faith  is, it cannot heal every disease on earth.

~Lynn

I have experienced the acupuncture several times becuase of my ankle and waist.

>> I have experienced acupuncture several times becuase of my ankle and waist.

As I like playing soccer game and working out at the gym, so there have been many injuries. 

>> I like playing soccer and working out at the gym so I have had many injuries. 
 Now, I will talk about faith healer and with doctor.

>> Now, I will talk about faith healers as doctors.

I can classify these as superstition.

>> correct!

Do you know \"placebo effect\"? I think if there are people who get better after being treated by these, it may be because of placebo effect.

>> correct!

I can\'t say that they are good methods to treat diseases, but it doesn\'t matter if patients become better status.

>> I can\'t say that these are good methods to treat diseases, but it doesn\'t matter if patients become/get better.

However, people who abuse their unrgent mind to get some money have to be criticized.

>> However, people who abuse their situation to earn money should be criticized.

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