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학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Jay,
I believe in faith healing to some extent but no matter how strong your faith is, it cannot heal every disease on earth.
~Lynn
I have experienced the acupuncture several times becuase of my ankle and waist.
>> I have experienced acupuncture several times becuase of my ankle and waist.
As I like playing soccer game and working out at the gym, so there have been many injuries.
>> I like playing soccer and working out at the gym so I have had many injuries.
Now, I will talk about faith healer and with doctor.
>> Now, I will talk about faith healers as doctors.
I can classify these as superstition.
>> correct!
Do you know \"placebo effect\"? I think if there are people who get better after being treated by these, it may be because of placebo effect.
>> correct!
I can\'t say that they are good methods to treat diseases, but it doesn\'t matter if patients become better status.
>> I can\'t say that these are good methods to treat diseases, but it doesn\'t matter if patients become/get better.
However, people who abuse their unrgent mind to get some money have to be criticized.
>> However, people who abuse their situation to earn money should be criticized.
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