HW38
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강사 첨삭
Jay,
If you want to settle in a certain place, owning a house is the best option. If you are just staying for a while then it\'s better to just rent. But then again, if you have more than enough money, owning a house for investment would be nice.(\",)
~Lynn
I have heard \"It will be common to rent house in the future because your generation will have many opportunities to go to other countries for you work\" since I was younger.
>> correct!
OR>> Since I was young, people have been telling me that renting will be common in the future since my generation will have more opportunities to work abroad.
I agree with these statements, but I think it is option whether buying a house or renting a house with environmental conditions.
>> I agree with this statement, but I think it is an option whether to buy a house or renting a house with environmental conditions.
Now, I think buying a house is better than renting a house because I can feel comfort for possession of my house.
>> Now, I think buying a house is better than renting because I can feel more comfortable in my own home.
Moreover, it is important to have a house, car and money when I try to ask ladies out on a date.
>> correct!
In Korea, for men who are over 30 years, people have a pevasive thinking that they have minimum wealth if they want to marry someone.
>> In Korea, for men who are over 30 years old, people have a pervasive thinking that they must have minimum wealth if they want to marry someone.
Thus, I will get and save money hard for my future.
>> Thus, I will work hard and save money for my future.
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