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Jay,
Most people dream of buying a house outside of the city after retirement. I hope you get your wish.(\",)
~Lynn
There are both advantages and disadvantages of living in the city.
>> correct!
In the city, there are many infrastructures and convenient stores.
>> correct!
It is easy to go there because those buildings are near by my house.
>> correct!
Also, it takes no long time to go to the hospital in emergency situations.
>> Also, it doesn\'t take a long time to go to the hospital in emergency situations.
However, there must be disadvantages of living in the city.
>> correct!
Above advantages could be alsi disadvangtage because if I have to study hard for exams, there are too many place I want to enjoy.
>> The above advantages could be also disadvantages because if I have to study hard for the exams, there are too many places I want to enjoy.
In addition, the ratio of crimes in the city is higher than the suburban area.
>> In addition, the ratio of crimes in the city is higher than in the suburban area.
When I am older, I want to live in suburbam area to enjoy peaceful and quite environments.
>> When I am older, I want to live in a suburban area to enjoy peaceful and quite environment.
For this lifestyle, I have to do my best in my current life.
>> correct!
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