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2018-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Lynn

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I\'m not good at noticing their characters when I meet someone at firtst but I have several standards to notice their characters. One of those is clothes. The colthes show their personality and also that makes me be favor of them. If someone wear worn clothes, actuallu I don\'t want to be familiar with them. I know that it is just their style but, it cannot be helped to be favor of them or not. In addition, I have one more standard to distance myself from them. It is how many they are saying. It means I don\'t like whom are talkative . I think that talkative people are fun and humorous but, they often lie or exaggerate the stories. Also they are not be helpful when I am actually in difficulties. These are my standards for checking people.

강사 첨삭

Hey Jay,

Have you heard the expression \"first impression lasts\"? What is your opinion on this?

~Lynn

I\'m not good at noticing their characters when I meet someone at first but I have several standards to notice their characters.

>> correct!

One of those is clothes.

>> correct!

The clothes show their personality and also that makes me be favor of them.

>> The clothes they wear can show their personality and that can make me favor them.

If someone wear worn clothes, actuality I don\'t want to be familiar with them.

>> correct!

 I know that it is just their style but, it cannot be helped to be favor of them or not.

>>  I know that it is just their style but, it cannot be helped to use it as a standard to favor them or not.

In addition, I have one more standard to distance myself from them.

>> correct!

It is how many they are saying. It means I don\'t like whom are talkative .

>> It is how much they are talking. It means, I don\'t like someone who is talkative.

I think that talkative people are fun and humorous but they often lie or exaggerate their stories.

>> correct!

Also they are not be helpful when I am actually in difficulties. These are my standards for checking people.

>> correct!

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