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Hey Jay,
Have you heard the expression \"first impression lasts\"? What is your opinion on this?
~Lynn
I\'m not good at noticing their characters when I meet someone at first but I have several standards to notice their characters.
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One of those is clothes.
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The clothes show their personality and also that makes me be favor of them.
>> The clothes they wear can show their personality and that can make me favor them.
If someone wear worn clothes, actuality I don\'t want to be familiar with them.
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I know that it is just their style but, it cannot be helped to be favor of them or not.
>> I know that it is just their style but, it cannot be helped to use it as a standard to favor them or not.
In addition, I have one more standard to distance myself from them.
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It is how many they are saying. It means I don\'t like whom are talkative .
>> It is how much they are talking. It means, I don\'t like someone who is talkative.
I think that talkative people are fun and humorous but they often lie or exaggerate their stories.
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Also they are not be helpful when I am actually in difficulties. These are my standards for checking people.
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