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Hey Jay!(\",)
When you\'ve run out of ideas the best thing to do is to do nothing. It gives your brain rest. You can\'t force an idea to come out of you when you are dead tired. So doing nothing sometimes help.(\",)
~Lynn
I have a principle when I progress a project and struggle to keep it.
>> I have a principle when I made progress with a project and struggle to keep it.
The principle is taking an enough rest before and after the project.
>> The principle is taking enough rest before and after the project.
I think that people have their own time to concentrate on something.
>> correct!
If it takes more time than they can concentrate on something, speed of solving and discussing problem will be decreasing gradually.
>> If it takes more time than they can concentrate on something, the speed of solving and discussing the problem will be decreasing gradually.
Like this, I also have my own time and I tend to keep this time and take a rest.
>> correct!
Moreover,I have heard that good idea could be came from fresh state of the brain becuase of supply a lot of oxygen to brain.
>> Moreover,I have heard that good ideas could come from the fresh state of the brain because the supply of oxygen to the brain is enough.
These days, there are so many projects and it is difficult for me to keep this principle because I need to consider the others\' time and the deadline is around the corner.
>> correct!
Thus,I must find another way to relieve my stress and control my concentration.
>> correct!
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