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Hey there Jay!(\",)

I think everyone yearns for world peace but there are few crazy people who wouldn\'t let this be. Aside from Korea, there is civil war in  many countries like Yemen, Syria, Turkey, Mali and more. I don\'t know if we\'ll be able to see the world at peace ever. Let\'s continue to pray and hope for it though.(\",)

~T. Lynn

I\'m not qualified for advicing something to the president but I have a hope, peace.

>> I\'m not qualified to advice the president but I have a hope, peace. 

First, we, only Korea is the nation where the war isn\'t finished.

>> First, only Korea is the nation where the war isn\'t finished.

Although it is ceasefire, we always have a worry for fighting again.

>> Although we are on ceasefire, we always worry about a possible war.

I think this point may affect many traveler from other countries not to visit Korea, and it is loss in tourist industry.

>> I think this may affect many travelers from other countries not to visit Korea, and it is a loss for the tourism industry. 

These days, three countries, South Korea, North Korea, and US, are struggling to make a peace from the threats of war.

>> These days, three countries - South Korea, North Korea, and the US, are struggling to make a peaceful resolution.

There are a lot of meetings among three nations in september more than ever.

>> There were a lot of meetings among the three nations specially last September.

I think that thress nations have to do their best in these chances for peace and I want the world where people don\'t have worries for nuclear and wars.

>> I think that these nations have to do their best for peace to  reign since I want a world where people don\'t have worries for nuclear weapons and wars.

For peace of the world, the leader of South Korea needs to do well as mediator between US and North Korea.

>> correct!