Hwanha's baseball player had commited crime.
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Hi, [이름]!
It\'s sad to know that Hanwha members have to face some issues.
Let\'s just hope that they would surpass these problems or issues.
And wish them good luck.
See you on Tuesday! Have a good night and a great weekend!
_Teacher Dianne ^^
Hwanha\'s baseball player had committed lots of crimes.
>> One of Hanwha\'s baseball players had committed lots of crimes.
Kim won Seok was out to Hwanha.Because he posted Sns bad words especially blaming Hwanha\'s baseball districts and blaming Hwanha\'s fans and blaming Korea Preisdent.
>> Kim Won Seok was out of Hanwha because he posted bad words on SNS especially blaming Hanwha\'s baseball districts, Hanwha\'s fans, and blaming the Korean President as well.
And today another Hwanha player go to Japan\'s police officer.
>> And today another Hwanha player went to the Japanese police station.
>> or: And today another Hwanha player was arrested by a Japanese police officer.
Japan\'s police said he raped some big market clerks.
>> The Japanese police officer said that he raped some market clerks.
Hwanha\'s changed their director and they wants to have strong teams.But there are big accidents in Hwanha.
>> Hanwha changed their director and they want to have a stronger team, but there are big accidents that happened to Hanwha members.
We have to focus how can hawnaha bear this situation.
>> We have to focus on how Hanwha will bear this situation.
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