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2014-12-16 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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adverb adjective adjective adjective adjective adjective adjective adverb adverb THere are two types of corals. One is Smoth body coral. These coral is very smoth and they don't have "swiper". We can frag them easliy . The other one is stone coral. There is two kinds of stone coral. One is LPS(this have swiper and also a valb.)the other one is SPS. It is hard to frag these corals because they have a valb.

강사 첨삭

Good Tuesday to you TOM!
Impressive! You did your homework early today.
You did well. Keep it up!

Thank you for sharing about the two types of corals.
I suddenly miss \"Tom\'s friends\". Hihihihi.

I admire you for sharing your knowledge about sea creatures in class.

I hope to see the corals that you mentioned below in the future.

Let us talk more about your essay in class. Have a fun day.

Teacher Nina


adverb

>> correct

>> OR: \'Hard\' is an adverb.
adjective

>> correct

>> OR: \'Fast\' is an adjective.
adjective

>> \'Straight\' is an adverb.
adjective

>> correct

>> \'Pretty\' is an adjective.
adjective

>> \'Pretty\' is an adverb
adjective

>> correct

>> \'Straight\' is an adjective
adjective

>> correct

>> \'Hard\' is an adjective
adverb

>> correct

>> \'Tight\' is an adverb.
adverb
>> \'Well\' is an adjective.
10. Well is an adverb

THere are two types of corals.

>> correct
One is Smoth body coral.

>> correct (spelling check: smooth ^^)
These coral is very smoth and they don\'t have \"swiper\".

>> This coral is very smooth and they don\'t have a \"swiper\".
We can frag them easliy .

>> correct
The other one is stone coral.

>> correct
There is two kinds of stone coral.

>> There are two kinds of Stone coral.
One is LPS(this have swiper and also a valb.)the other one is SPS.

>> One is LPS which has a swiper and a valve, the other one is SPS.
It is hard to frag these corals because they have a valb.

>> correct ( spelling check: valve ^^)

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