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Good afternoon and happy Friday TOM ^^
Job well done! I am glad that you are learning intermediate and advanced words these days.
I am proud of you. ^^ I hope that you will continue enhancing your word bank.
Yes, I heard about backdraught. I think it is really scary.
That is one thing that kills our heroes who put off the fire.
We should always be grateful to firemen.
Take care. Talk to you soon.
Teacher Nina
I want to learn anatomical pathology.
>> correct
>> OR: I want to study Anatomical Pathology.
I want to play outside because breeze is blowing now.
>> I want to play outside because the breeze is blowing.
The tom that I know is a credible person.
>> correct ( capitalization: TOM ^^)
The fiu worsened and finally he died.
>> His flu worsened and he died.
>> OR: His disease worsened and he died.
It is the most undeniable evidence that I found.
>> correct
>> OR: The evidence that I found is undeniable.
The thing that firefighter most hate and scared is a backdraught.
>> That thing that firefighters hate the most and scared about is backdraught.
Backdraught\'s reason is oxyzen.
>> The reason of experiencing backdraught is oxygen.
>> OR: The reason for a backdraught is oxygen.
When the fire mix with the oxyzen suddenly,it makes a huge explosion.
>> When the fire mixes with oxygen, it makes a huge explosion.
Actually many firefighter died because of the backdraught.
>> Actually many firefighters died because of it.
>> OR: Actually many firefighters died because of backdraught.
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