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Good evening TOM!
I definitely agree with you.
They really suffer from those people who hate them.
It is really difficult to overcome negative accusations when people already believed it.
Let us hope that goodness will prevail these days.
Talk to you in class.
Teacher Nina
Well known celebrities suffer from the anti people.
>> Well-known people suffer from bashers.
>> OR: Celebrities suffer from anti people.
>> OR: Celebrities/ well-known people suffer from anti-social people.
They send a message and it is all about the celebrities\'mistake and false imformation.
>> They send messages and false information about them.
Actually many well known celebrities killed themselves because of the false imformation.
>> Actually, some celebrities killed themselves because of false accusations.
EXO the famous boy group has the anti people.
>> correct
>> OR: EXO the famous K-pop group has bashers.
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