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Hi there again Mr. [Name]. 

I\'m sorry that it took me a long time to finish the corrections. 

Anyway, when we say music, we do not refer it or call it as \"she\".

Since \"she is  used for a person,a  woman. 

Music is not a person and of course a woman so we use \"it\" to refer about the music. 

Anyway, thanks for today. 
And please check the corrections I have written below. 

See you tomorrow.

Take care! 

Always, 

Kathrine ^^

What is music for you?

Music is my lifetime companion.

>> correct! 

When I get in trouble and under a lot of stress. She will help me and give me the energy to overcome. 

>>When I get into trouble and under stress, it will helps me and gives me the energy ton overcome every stress. 

And I like gospel song very much.

>> correct! 

Personally, I often get the response of my prayer from the lylic of gospel.

>> Personally. I often get a response of my prayers from the lyrics of the gospel. 

I love this song \"God will make a way\" by Don meon.

>> correct! (capitalization-proper noun)

The message from that song always raise me up when I am down.

>> the message from that song raises me up when I am down. 

 When I feel it is impossible to do is or there is no way to handle it. This message from that song inspire me.

>>When I feel that it is impossible to do or there is not way to handle it, the message from the song inspires me. 

 How many songs do you currently have on your computer?

There are a lot of songs on my computer.

>> correct! 

I can\'t even count it anymore.

>> correct! 

And To listen to music by using smart phone, I used to transfer music file to my smart phone from the computer.

>> To listen to music using the smart phone, I used to transfer some music files to my smart phone from the computer.