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When I am on my duty, I want to comprehend the officer's task.
I told you that I will on my duty and It will be my second chance to be on duty.
So I need to checklist.
Not far from now, I will take many tests by commanders order.
It is very important for me to grasp the concept of the task.
because of the test, which I will take, I have to study hard.
and I will take a course to execute some electronic instruments.
I have to complete the course.
My additional work time in this month was almost 50 hours.
and the regular work time is 8-hour in every day.
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When I am on my duty, I want to comprehend the officer\'s task.
>> Did you mean: When I am on duty, I want to comprehend the officers\' task.I told you that I will on my duty and It will be my second chance to be on duty.
>> I told you that I will be on duty and it will be my second.So I need to checklist.
>> So I need to a checklist.Not far from now, I will take many tests by commanders order.>> It is not far from now, I will take many tests by my commander\'s order.
>> OR: It is not far from now, I will take a lot of test by my commander\'s order.It is very important for me to grasp the concept of the task.>> Correct!because of the test, which I will take, I have to study hard.
>> It is because of the test, I have to study hard. and I will take a course to execute some electronic instruments.
>> Correct!I have to complete the course.>> Correct!My additional work time in this month was almost 50 hours.
>> My additional work time this month is almost fifty hours. and the regular work time is 8-hour in every day.
>> And the regular working time is for eight hours everyday.
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