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2014-01-29 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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When I am on my duty, I want to comprehend the officer's task. I told you that I will on my duty and It will be my second chance to be on duty. So I need to checklist. Not far from now, I will take many tests by commanders order. It is very important for me to grasp the concept of the task. because of the test, which I will take, I have to study hard. and I will take a course to execute some electronic instruments. I have to complete the course. My additional work time in this month was almost 50 hours. and the regular work time is 8-hour in every day.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름]! Thank you for sending another one. You are doing great! I commend you for being a hard working person. Please go over the corrections below and if you have any questions, you can ask it in class. See you! Take Care! Teacher Nina   When I am on my duty, I want to comprehend the officer\'s task. >> Did you mean: When I am on duty, I want to comprehend the officers\' task.I told you that I will on my duty and It will be my second chance to be on duty. >> I told you that I will be on duty and it will be my second.So I need to checklist. >> So I need to a checklist.Not far from now, I will take many tests by commanders order.>> It is not far from now, I will take many tests by my commander\'s order. >> OR: It is not far from now, I will take a lot of test by my commander\'s order.It is very important for me to grasp the concept of the task.>> Correct!because of the test, which I will take, I have to study hard. >> It is because of the test, I have to study hard. and I will take a course to execute some electronic instruments. >> Correct!I have to complete the course.>> Correct!My additional work time in this month was almost 50 hours. >> My additional work time this month is almost fifty hours. and the regular work time is 8-hour in every day. >> And the regular working time is for eight hours everyday.

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