I
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like to see to top of the Bukhan mountain.
So when i was younger, sometimes i woke up in the morning and i climb the Bukhan mountain.
That view so gorgeous. If you see that view, you like that.
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Hello, [이름]!
I appreciate you for submitting your homework. ^^
I hope that one day, you can go back to Bukhan mountain so that you can see it it\'s gorgeous view again.
I hope that one day, I\'ll also see it in person. ^^
I actually searched its images and it was awesome!
~Teacher Gina
>> CORRECT.
So when i was younger, sometimes i woke up in the morning and i climb the Bukhan mountain.
So when i was younger, sometimes i woke up in the morning and i climb the Bukhan mountain.
>> When I was younger, I sometimes wake up and climb the Bukhan mountain in the morning.
That view so gorgeous.
That view so gorgeous.
>> That view was so gorgeous.
If you see that view, you like that.
>> If you will see that view, you will like it.
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