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remember that is climbed the mountain in winter.
We climbed mountain at 8pm to 7am. so i felt very cold.
and When we stay at mountain, i slept a little.
And i woke up and i felt freeze. i think that i\'m died.
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>> I remember that we climbed the mountain in winter.
We climbed mountain at 8pm to 7am. so i felt very cold.
We climbed mountain at 8pm to 7am. so i felt very cold.
>> We climbed the mountain from 8 pm to 7 am so I felt very cold.
and When we stay at mountain, i slept a little.
and When we stay at mountain, i slept a little.
> And when we stayed in the mountain, I slept a little.
And i woke up and i felt freeze. i think that i\'m died.
And i woke up and i felt freeze. i think that i\'m died.
>> I woke up and I felt like I\'m freezing.
i think that i\'m died.
>> I thought I died.
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