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2019-08-14 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

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think if i have a that situation, i would like to join my friend or my older cousin. Because i\'m so timid so i need some activity person like my friend and my older cousin.

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I think if i have a that situation, i would like to join my friend or my older cousin.
>> I think if I would have that type of situation, I would like to join my friend or my older cousin.
Because i\'m so timid so i need some activity person like my friend and my older cousin.
>> That\'s because I\'m so timid so I need someone who is an active person like my friend or my older cousin.

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