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2019-08-26 · 첨삭 강사 Gina

학생이 쓴 원문

like a pizza from Italy, especially i like a Pizza Margherita. That is so simple, but that has harmonious tastes. And i would like to experience Buko pie and Jolly Bee foods.

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!

Thank you for sending your homework. ^^
Pizzas are the best. 
And thank you for wanting to taste Filipino food as well.
I hope that you can try them soon. ^^

~Teacher Gina


I like a pizza from Italy, especially i like a Pizza Margherita.
>> I like the pizzas from Italy especially the margherita pizza.
That is so simple, but that has harmonious tastes.
>> It is so simple but it has a harmonious taste. 
And i would like to experience Buko pie and Jolly Bee foods.
>> And I would like to experience eating Buko pie and Jolly Bee food.

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