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missed when i traveling in Jeju island. I traveled in Jeju island with my family. Back then, we go to the Hanla mountain. We went up that during two hours. It was hard a little bit, But when we arrived the top of the Hanla mountain, it was gorgeous.
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Hello, [이름]!
Thank you so much for sending your travel experience. ^^
Have a wonderful night and see you tomorrow.
~Teacher Gina
>> I missed the time when I was traveling Jeju Island.
I traveled in Jeju island with my family.
>> CORRECT.
Back then, we go to the Hanla mountain.
>> Back then, we went to Hanla Mountain.
We went up that during two hours.
>> We went up for two hours.
It was hard a little bit, But when we arrived the top of the Hanla mountain, it was gorgeous.
>> It was a little bit hard but when we arrived on top of the Hanla mountain, it was gorgeous.
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